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Codac
Jul 28, 2012 19:04:15 GMT -8
Post by DarkBlue on Jul 28, 2012 19:04:15 GMT -8
Name; Codac Age; 4 years 5 months Gender; Male Breed; Unknown
Eye Color; Red, with a bit of pale blue on the rim. Build; He is huge, More like a bare than a wolf, but only semi-muscular. Voice; A light voice, rather suiting for his size. Tends to be rather intimidating at times. Description;
Codac is extremely large, as a result to the largest of the large breeding over many generations. As a result to this, he is an unknown mix of many breeds. His fur is multiple shades of brown, being darker on the top and lighter on the bottom, fading to a yellow-y brown at his large paws. His face is very narrow, and his teeth are to big to be hid behind his mouth, they stick out at the tips. His fur is rather long, and kinda scruffy. The long fur on his neak often sticks up. His paws and claws are large, and he has long legs. Although he is large, he is about average in muscular-ness and often relays on speed instead of power.
Likes;
Wolves who don't judge him by eye color.
Codac does not believe the eye color of a wolf does not always tell who a wolf is inside. Such as in his case, he believes it may not always be correct, and would never judge a wolf by eye color.
Being treated like a pack member
Because it is rare for him, Codac tends to like the feeling of being treated like a real part of a pack. He would loyally defend his pack, and feels that he deserves to be acknowledged as part of the pack by all his fellow members and the alpha. Young wolves and Pups
Codac has a thing for young wolves and pups. He likes there energy and playfulness, but also there innocence. He believes that all wolves should have a fun and loving pup-hood, and would never stand for a mother mistreating her pup.
Following Orders
Following orders gives Codac a sense of security. He rarely disagrees with he leader, and will always be happy to follow orders from another wolf, as long as there reasonable of course.
Dislikes;
Lying
Codac is not a big fan of Lying, even to an enemy. He feels that every wolf deserves to know the solid truth, even if its an awful truth. That's not to say hes bad at it, hes got quite a snake toung. However, The only time he will lie is to save someone he loves or if hes planning on surprising someone. being asked about his size
Its not a very interesting story anyways, why he is so big. He came from a biggest pack were the biggest wolves bred with the biggest to make huge wolves. Just something about having to tell it over, and over, and over again has made the story annoy him.
Sleeping
Codac feels that when he sleeps, his guard is let down so he tries not to sleep in front of other wolves. He has had to watch his own back for many years, and now considers sleep a weakness. Codac sometimes goes days without sleeping, using determination to keep him awake.
Being asked about his past
its not a pretty past, and its rather a story that shouldn't be told. He himself is still trying to forget it, and often times he will snap at a wolf, just for asking.
Strengths; Intimadation
His size is sometimes intimidation to smaller wolves, and has saved him quite a few fights with other wolves. Hes got a nasty snarl to, that can make a proud wolf back down. Quick Thinker
Codacs quick thinking skills can get him out of tricky situations with other wolves. He has a way of turning the tables, and often does to save a fight. Expirience
Codac is experienced in fighting and other situations that gives him an upper hand sometimes if he does get into fights or get into a jam.
Weaknesses;
Can have a short temper
His short temper can often come out if he is asked about his past or treated rude because of his eye color. His bad temper rarely makes him anything other than a roll of the eyes and a few bad words, but on occasion he can start a fight. Bad at reading other wolves
Its never been one of his strengths, in fact he down right sucks at reading another wolfs emotions unless its displayed directly on there face. he has trouble imagining whet it must be like for other wolves, unless it has happened to him.
Trouble
Although he doesn't intend to, he often attracts trouble or runs into trouble. He also has a thing for hanging around in the wrong crowds. Hes got many funny stories to tell about trouble he has gotten himself or others into.
Personality;
MisJudged; Codac is often misjudged because of his size and his eye color. Although he has killed other wolves, He himself is not a bad wolf at heart, evan if he has some bad days. The pale blue rim around his irises are proof that he is a good wolf at heart, even though he may not seem it at first glance
Short temperd
His short temper is said to have come from his father, although it never causes him any real trouble. The most his temper ever gets him, is a mouthful of bad words and a the occasional rude snort.
Secratvie His life is a misery to most, as he only shares it with wolves close to him. He may give a little information, but not much. Just the nessisary. Often times he dissapears off to places, and has no word of it when he returns. His feelings and emotions are almost always kept inside, unless he really feels he can trust the wolf he is speaking with.
Loyal
Codac wouldn't betray his pack or his few friends for the world. He always sticks by his beliefs and his friends. although he is known to keep secretes, he never means harm to anyone. He would, and has, killed for the ones he loves. Codac can keep a secrete like no other wolf, because he has so many of his own.
Confusing
Codac tends to be hard to figure out to most wolves. On first glance, you may take him for violent because of the thin and barely notable scars that cover his body, and his glowing red eyes. But if you hang around long enough, you'll learn that he is polite and even charming at times. Once you really get to know him, you'll see he can he miscivious, and energetic. If you talk to him on a bad day, he can appear moody and hostile. If you talk to him on a good day, he can be fun and unusually flirty. He may seem secretive and unable to crack, but if you look deep enough you'll see hes just waiting for a special wolf to talk to. Monstrous
Deep in him, Codac has part of his father in him. It rarely comes out, as he keeps it hidden very deep. It only comes out when he is extremely angry, but when it does he becomes a monster. He feels no pity, no mercy, and no need to spare lives. This has only ever happened to him three times, and may lives were lost. The worst part is, he doesn't remember any of it.
Family;
Noctos
His father, who never acknowledged Codac as his son and favored his brother. Unknown Jenna
Codacs loving mother, who always believed he was special. She was killed by Noctoc, when Codac was young. Dead Keilala
Codacs older sister, who always protected Codac from there father until she left the pack when Jenna died. Alive Neroc
Codacs litter-mate brother, he was always big from birth and was the favored by there father. Killed by Codac in a fight for the role of alpha. Dead
History; At Birth
He and his brother were fine for the first few months. They were born in a small den, in a pack that he would come to know as home. There mother, Jenna, loved both of the young pups equally. There father, Neroc, did not see them until they were both old enough to run. Codac soon learned that this was a nessisary skill to survival in his pack. Year One
Codac grew notable slower than Neroc, and remained arrive wolf size for the first few years, well Neroc grew very fast and was the size of a yearling after a few months. Codacs father, upon first meeting, immediately decided that Neroc was a keeper and Codac was not. The camp grounds became a dangerous place for codac, the only safe place being his birth den, were his mother stay. Codac was often attacked by his pack members, and constantly picked on by order of his father. That first year, he almost died four times, all of them at his fathers paw. Year Two
Codacs mother was killed by his father in the spring, for unknown reasons. This left Codac unguarded and sure to die. His brother, Neroc, had now turned against him to, often attacking the smaller pup so there father would favor him over Codac. It was than that Codacs sister, Keilala stepped in and guarded Codac in her mothers place. She taught Codac how to fight like a pro, than left the pack. Year Three
Codac got into many fights in the spring, but killed no wolves. however, he never once started the fight. His size started to catch up with him, and he grew at increadable speeds until he was the biggest wolf in the pack, next to his brother. Noctos dissapeared, and left the role of alpha unclaimed Naturally, Codac and Neroc fought, and Codac came out victorious. Finally, after all his hard work, he had his own pack. Year Four
The spring came, than the summer. No commotion came until the fall when fire spread threw his pack, killing most of it off. with nowhere to go, Codac started wondering around, looking for a mate to start a pack with. But he quickly realized, he was not meant to lead, and is currently searching for a pack to join and settle down in. He traveled very far, to this land, were he learned that red eyed wolves were not appreciated. Perhaps he was just not meant to have a normal life.
Pack; Looking Rank; Loner
RP Sample;
See previous character
Notes; Your Name; D.B Other Characters; Dawn, Shadow, Nakera, and now Codac ^^
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Codac
Aug 3, 2012 5:17:37 GMT -8
Post by Revan on Aug 3, 2012 5:17:37 GMT -8
It looks great, I only see two things to fix c:
The first is one of his dislikes, you mentioned that he hates to sleep. This is fine, but no wolf can go weeks without sleep like you said Codac does. Days is more acceptable, but weeks is unrealistic.
The second is how in the first part of his personality is you mentioned Codac has red eyes because of his ancestors. Eye color is in no way hereditary, it only reflects an individuals specific personality. I won't ask you to change the eye color because it does sound like he is having a war with himself, like good vs evil. So if you change that specific part of the personality, then he'll be accepted c:
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Codac
Aug 4, 2012 13:58:13 GMT -8
Post by DarkBlue on Aug 4, 2012 13:58:13 GMT -8
fixed, sory about the weeks thing, it was actually ment to be days weeks must have slipped out X3
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Codac
Aug 4, 2012 16:16:10 GMT -8
Post by Revan on Aug 4, 2012 16:16:10 GMT -8
Looks great c:
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