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Rainbow
Sept 9, 2012 3:02:22 GMT -8
Post by Danger on Sept 9, 2012 3:02:22 GMT -8
Name; Rainbow Age; 3 years and 3 months Gender; Female Breed; Artic wolf
Eye Color; bright red Build; small, making her look innocent. Voice; Soft, but can be sickly sweet when she's about to kill a wolf or something. Description;
Rainbow has an innocent air about her, even with all her battle scars. She has some on her tail, body, neck and head it's impossible to count them all. Like most Artic wolves, and unlike her name, she has a white coat, with a slightly grey underbelly and a bit of grey starting off her tail. Her red eyes can be a giveaway, but normally they draw other wolves in. She has an evil grin, especially when she does something bad. Her fur is more on the thicker side, having come from the cold parts of the world. She keeps a calm posture, and holds her head high as if royalty, but will lower it to trick some into thinking she is weak. She has good acting skills, to either lure wolves in or make them think that they are intimidating. Her bright eyes will glow brighter when near death or pain.
Likes; Death, pain, snow and anything evil. Dislikes; blue eyed wolves, anything cute and anything good. Strengths; Luring wolves in to kill, pretending that she's innocent and acting as if she's scared so that the intimidating wolf thought he was better, before she would attack. Weaknesses; Thinks she's better then everyone and her pride of killing a wolf more experienced then her can make her unaware of her surroundings for a few minutes. Personality;
Rainbow is really pure evil. She hates all blue or grey eyed wolves, and will try to kill them on sight. She loves the look on the wolf's face as she kills them, and the feeling of happiness that comes with it. If she had had a good childhood, he would have been smart, happy and loved life. But, she didn't have a good childhood and so she turned out to be a monster who enjoyed pain of other people, and a lot of death. If a fellow red eyed wolf had come her way, she would have eyed him suspiciously but let him/her pass. Rainbow acted on instinct, which led her well. She trained hard with another red eyed, becoming a better fighter. Rainbow barely has any friends, only ones that are red eyed and even then she might kill them. She had a big ego, and didn't like anything that would deflate it. Her pride sometimes got in the way, hence the scars. She enjoyed beating a wolf stronger or faster, and when they were near death she would dance all over their bodies taunting him/her how they got beaten by her. Then, depending on what the wolf said she would kill them slowly, or fast.
Family; Flake (mother):dead IceStar(sister):dead Fire(father):dead History;
Rainbow had a terrible childhood. Her parents tried in every way possible to make her perfect for the alpha. At that time, she had bright blue eyes. When one day, at the age of 2 and a half, her father hit her for coming home muddy and she just snapped and killed him in a instant when he had turned his back. She got so sick of her mother, she killed her too. Her sister tried to intervene, but Rain was stronger and she died. With every death, her eyes went from blue to red. Knowing that they had wanted her to be the mate of the alpha, she killed him too by biting thickly into his neck by surprise and with her powerful jaws the alpha bled to death. Then, her eyes went from slightly red to the brightest it could be. Feeling happy that she was free from her problems, she went around as a rogue, killing all the blue eyes she could. On her journey, she met another red eye who offered to train her, seeing potential. After training her to the best he could, he was killed in a fatal sparring match. Rainbow had shrugged and moved on. Being from the cold, she still loved the snow and often played in it. Now, she goes around killing all the blue eyed, and never staying in the same place for long.
Pack; none Rank; rogue
RP Sample;
not my first charrie
Notes; none Your Name; Danger Other Characters; StarFire
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Rainbow
Sept 25, 2012 16:09:43 GMT -8
Post by Revan on Sept 25, 2012 16:09:43 GMT -8
Most of the app looks good, but the only problem I have with it is the history. What age was Rainbow when she killed her father? If she was a young wolf it would be unlikely that she would even be able to do it, especially if both her mother and sister were present at the time. With three wolves against one it would be unlikely for her to succeed in killing all of them, unless there was a good reason for it. I recommend you take a look at the section "Roleplaying Red-Eyed Wolves" in this thread: songforthelost.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=plot&action=display&thread=55Red-eyed wolves can be hard to use, especially like the one you've created here. She would very rarely be able to participate in any threads with blue or gray-eyed wolves, which is most of our characters on the site. As mentioned in the thread I have provided a link to, a red-eyed wolf doesn't have to be a short-tempered wolf always looking for a fight, they can simply be someone who only looks out for themselves and couldn't care less about others. I'm not necessarily asking you to change her personality (Although the history is questionable), I'm only warning you that she will be hard to roleplay.
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Rainbow
Sept 25, 2012 16:10:45 GMT -8
Post by Danger on Sept 25, 2012 16:10:45 GMT -8
Yeah, I've read the thread and I'll change a few bits here and there.
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Rainbow
Sept 25, 2012 16:32:24 GMT -8
Post by Revan on Sept 25, 2012 16:32:24 GMT -8
One and a half is still really young to kill a full grown wolf, unless the other wolf was inexperienced. Do you think you could modify it to make her a bit older?
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Rainbow
Sept 25, 2012 16:33:08 GMT -8
Post by Danger on Sept 25, 2012 16:33:08 GMT -8
sure.
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Rainbow
Sept 25, 2012 16:38:43 GMT -8
Post by Revan on Sept 25, 2012 16:38:43 GMT -8
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